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For #ScreamPrompts' Children's Fiction Prompt: fav.me/d6g4jak
- Someone is right for the first time in their life.
- Main character is 6-10 years old.
- Children's fiction. First person POV.

Thought this would be a really fun one because it would force me to think a bit different. I haven't written a children's story since I was well, a child. :lol: So this is meant to be aimed at children as well as being about a kid. I wanted to write one of those stories where the character starts off with a really minor problem but keeps making it worse and worse for themselves.

So the idea was people who don't like stepping on drains because it looks like you'll fall in, even though it's basically impossible. :XD: But what if we're right??

I tried to pace it well, but let me know if it loses you anywhere. Also, how the kid's 'voice' sounds. She should be 10.
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahahahahhaha how funny! The end is just great! Congrats on the DD!
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014   Digital Artist
Thank you! :love: Glad you enjoyed it.
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averrose Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As a children's story, this is well-written and amusing. It's not super-blatant, so working out some of the nuances of the characters and the context kept it fun. I enjoyed your style and the brisk, action-y pace, and you let the characters' personalities come through nicely. Oh, and she sounds 10, so good job on that as well!
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014   Digital Artist
Thank you! :heart: I'm glad you think so. :love:
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derpychan14 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This story is definitely worth the DD! Your style inspires me to write some more. :)
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014   Digital Artist
Oh wow, thanks! :blowkiss:  I hope you do.
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derpychan14 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure!
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raspil Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Writer
Super cool, I will add this to the DD list later today.
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Digital Artist
:la: Your group is a DD machine! You make good prompts.
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raspil Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Writer
this one was one of the toughest, you did a good job.
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